Not as great as your past games( Such as One Chance ). This story lacked deepness, and was blatant. It should of been a flash, rather than an actual game, because of how short the storyline was and the little involvement the player had. All in all, it was just a stale-plot with fancy graphics.
Overall, you recieve 2.5 stars for the amazing graphical improvement you've made. Please make more games like ' One Chance ', as that game had a deep and original story.
Thanks,
-PW